Screenwriting Tips: Flashbacks

December 28th, 2011 by admin No comments »

Flashbacks can be extraordinarily powerful storytelling devices. But they’re also dangerous territory for young writers. For this reason, many screenwriting gurus insist on rigid rules that scare young writers away from using flashbacks at all.

While that will definitely keep you out of trouble, it probably won’t bring out your best writing either. So if flashbacks are calling you, there’s nothing wrong with dancing with the devil in your writing. Just make sure you understand him first.

Here are the top three reasons why flashbacks can be dangerous for young writers:

1: Movies move! And a lot faster than you think.

Generally, when movies are working, they’re hurtling forward at a breakneck pace, propelling your character on the most powerful journey of his or her life in a mere 100 pages. Flashbacks can stop this forward motion and reverse the momentum of your story, driving your character’s journey backwards when you want it to be moving forwards. Imagine if you were driving your car at 100 miles per hour, and suddenly slammed it into reverse. That’s exactly the effect that a poorly executed flashback has on a screenplay-killing the transmission just when things were finally starting to get moving.

2: Exposition Is Boring

Nine times out of ten, flashbacks exist in a movie purely to explain stuff to the audience. We call this stuff exposition, and it absolutely kills drama. No matter how exciting the content of your flashback may seem, if it exists only to explain stuff to the audience, it’s probably not going to have the effect you intendedAudiences come to movies to watch drama-a character pursuing something they desperately want in the face of seemingly insurmountable obstacles-not to find out information about stuff that happened a long time ago. Watching a movie filled with expository flashbacks is the equivalent of having an annoying friend whispering in your ear the whole time, explaining why things are happening, instead of just letting you experience the character’s journey.

3: If You’re Focused On The Audience, You’re Not Focused On The Character.

Even more dangerous than the problems flashbacks can pose for your audience is the confusion they can create for you as a writer. » Read more: Screenwriting Tips: Flashbacks

Writing Treatments

December 25th, 2011 by admin No comments »

Writing treatments is a task beyond the capability of most writers. Special skill and years of rigorous practice are usually required before you can sell a treatment. You will do a better job if you can answer the following when writing treatments:

• Why is it that you want to write a treatment?
• Is it meant to act as a guideline for you?
• Is it meant to sell your script?
• Have you been specifically asked by an authority to compose it?
• Are you writing an original screenplay or is it an adaption of someone else’s work?

Each of these answers will have profound influence when writing treatments in a certain way. The treatment should not trudge along predictable lines, sounding drab. Instead, add pep to it by capturing the thrill of each scene. For a while, just forget that you are writing. Tell your story in present tense as if you are narrating a cliff-hanger to a group of your buddies. Bring in a visual effect to the treatment if you want it to be worthwhile.

There are hundreds and thousands of aspiring candidates out there, all writing treatments to the best of their abilities. Create yours to be different, something to shake the reader awake, take note of it, and contact you for the main script. Penning treatments saves time — yours and the prospective customers’. Your time is saved because treatment writing acts as a blueprint for you to base your screenplay upon. It helps to keep you focused on the pre-meditated plan. The reader is also saved the bother of having to read page-after-page of a long, completed screenplay. » Read more: Writing Treatments